It's just a speech line with pauses of thought and not a narration, anything wrong with that?
And can you kindly not type the same word twice? Those two 'withs' make you sound like a stuttering idiot with mental retardation issues, thank you?
And can you kindly not type the same word twice? Those two 'withs' make you sound like a stuttering idiot with mental retardation issues, thank you?